Create Compelling MBA Essays
The Essay Package is for the applicant who has the stats and the resume but needs their story to have a soul. This is where we take you from a "strong candidate" on paper to a human being the admissions committee wants to meet. Whether you’re staring at a blank page or you’re stuck in a draft that feels a bit "meh," I'm here to turn your experiences into a page-turner. Here’s how we make your story unforgettable: 1. The "Story Excavation" (Kickoff) We start by digging. We’ll go back through your history to find the moments and hidden gems that you might have overlooked. This isn't just a chat; it’s a strategic session to lay a foundation that is 100% authentic. 2. Finding Your Competitive Edge "Leadership" and "Collaboration" are buzzwords everyone uses. We’re going to find your specific differentiator. We’ll work together to figure out how to weave your unique "spark" through every essay so that by the time they’re done reading, they feel like they know exactly who you are and why they need you. 3. The Narrative (Brainstorming) This is where we play with angles. We’ll take your best stories and wrestle with them to find the most compelling perspective. We aren't just looking for a good story; we’re looking for the right story that aligns with what top-tier programs are hunting for. 4. Architecting the Draft Once we have the plan, we build. I’ll help you structure your thoughts into a clear, high-impact narrative that flows logically. No rambling or getting lost in the details—we’re building a streamlined, powerful case for your admission. 5. The "Refactor" & Polish (Editing) We’ll go through multiple rounds of feedback, hacking away the fluff and refining your voice until every sentence earns its place on the page. We don’t stop until the prose is sharp, the impact is clear, and the tone is perfect. The Bottom Line: This package is flexible, tailored, and designed to be your essay's secret weapon. You get a coach who acts as your chief strategist and precision editor, giving you the honest feedback you need to ensure your essays don’t just get read—they get remembered.
What's included
I am super up front and don't hold anything back! I'll share clear instructions on what's working well and what needs to change. We'll keep working (however many iterations it takes) until we both feel you have written the best possible essays!
- Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to
- A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why business schools should care
- An outline and several drafts of essays that end with a final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams
Meet your expert
Geri T.
I am a former full-time member of the MBA Admissions Board at Harvard Business School. I spent 8 years reviewing and evaluating applications, conducting interviews, and marketing the school at MBA panels and conferences. I helped launch and manage the 2+2 Program (deferred admissions). I hold a B.A. from the University of Delaware. Most of my career has been spent in higher education within Career and Professional Development, Admissions, and Digital Education. Born in New Jersey (thankfully no accent remains), I now live just outside Boston with my husband and 2 teenage children. Our most recent addition to the family is our mini Bernadoodle, Java. I love podcasts, Formula 1, and books of all kind.