Asynchronous MBA Resume and Essay Review and Edits
This package is designed for MBA applicants who want focused, high-quality feedback on their resume and essays without a full coaching engagement. It is best suited for applicants who are confident in their overall story and are looking to refine how it comes across on the page. You will receive structured, written feedback across two rounds of edits, followed by a final polish. I focus on clarity, positioning, and precision, helping you strengthen how your leadership, impact, and career goals are communicated in your materials. My approach goes beyond line edits. I evaluate how your resume and essays work together, where your narrative lacks clarity or specificity, and where you can better differentiate yourself. You will receive direct, actionable feedback that you can implement quickly. This package is ideal for applicants who already have drafts and want to refine them to a high standard before submission.
What's included
- ✍️ Two full rounds of written edits and comments on your MBA resume and essays
- 🧾 In-line feedback focused on clarity, structure, and positioning
- 🎯 Targeted suggestions to strengthen your leadership narrative and differentiation
- 🔍 Identification of gaps, inconsistencies, or weak points across materials
- 🧠 Guidance on how to revise effectively between rounds
- ✅ A final polish pass to refine language, flow, and overall quality before submission
Meet your expert
Bri M.
I am a dual-degree student at Harvard Kennedy School and MIT Sloan School of Management, and I help applicants turn their experiences into clear, compelling stories that get results. My clients have been admitted to programs at Harvard and MIT, including Harvard Kennedy School and MIT’s MSRED. Before graduate school, I worked in government consulting, advising state health agencies on Medicaid innovation and operational strategy. I also interpreted Executive Branch policy for firm leadership, helping translate complex policy decisions into actionable guidance for internal teams. Now I coach clients to secure offers and MBA sponsorships at Big 4 firms like Deloitte and Accenture, drawing on my experience in the room with decision-makers. My approach is strategic but highly personal. Many of the applicants I work with are strong (but not perfect!) on paper and unsure how to position their experiences, especially those coming from public sector, social impact, or nontraditional paths. I help them build a narrative that is both authentic and clearly differentiated. My goal is simple: to help you articulate your story in a way that makes admissions committees, and you, see just how strong it already is.